Pyaar kiya tha tujh se maine, jaan lutaaya tha tum pe maine.
Chaha tha tujhe rab se zyaada kyu ki mein tha theri yaari pe fida
Dhadkane tho meri chal rahi thi lekin mera dil toh tere paas tha.
Zindagi me aur koi na tha dooja bas ek pal ki bhi judaai tha mere liye saaza.
Guzaare the pal un anjaan raaho me dekhthe ek doosre ke aankoh me
Hamare rishthe kaa naam pyaar tha na kabhi takraar tha na kabhi ekraar tha
Naa the faasle aur naahi darmiya phir bhi kyu tune yu mera dil thod diya
Chal rahe the saath me ek duje ke wassthe phir bhi kyu tune mera haath choddiya
Zindagi ke is haar jeeth ki khel me tere liye me haar gaya lekin jab teri baari aayi toh yu mooh mod liya
Ishq tune jaagaya mohabhat karna tune sikhaya dokha bhi tune diya lekin bewafa mujhe banaya
Jab zindagi hi tere naam kardiya toh ye bewafaai kuch nahi...
Jab pyaar hi tere naam karidiya toh ye judaai bhi kuch nahi...
Jab jaan hi tujhe kurbaan kardiya toh ye badnaami bhi kuch nahi...
Aapki Pyaari
~D
Chaha tha tujhe rab se zyaada kyu ki mein tha theri yaari pe fida
Dhadkane tho meri chal rahi thi lekin mera dil toh tere paas tha.
Zindagi me aur koi na tha dooja bas ek pal ki bhi judaai tha mere liye saaza.
Guzaare the pal un anjaan raaho me dekhthe ek doosre ke aankoh me
Hamare rishthe kaa naam pyaar tha na kabhi takraar tha na kabhi ekraar tha
Naa the faasle aur naahi darmiya phir bhi kyu tune yu mera dil thod diya
Chal rahe the saath me ek duje ke wassthe phir bhi kyu tune mera haath choddiya
Zindagi ke is haar jeeth ki khel me tere liye me haar gaya lekin jab teri baari aayi toh yu mooh mod liya
Ishq tune jaagaya mohabhat karna tune sikhaya dokha bhi tune diya lekin bewafa mujhe banaya
Jab zindagi hi tere naam kardiya toh ye bewafaai kuch nahi...
Jab pyaar hi tere naam karidiya toh ye judaai bhi kuch nahi...
Jab jaan hi tujhe kurbaan kardiya toh ye badnaami bhi kuch nahi...
Aapki Pyaari
~D
You write very well , have seen some of u'r other blogs too. I think u should keep posting more frequently. And now you have a fan following u'r blogs ;-)
ReplyDeletewas searching for hindiblogs on ishq, came across this. This one is good to read, liked it, but i feel this is thought from just one side.i don't know if this is your real experience or just a thought but yes make it complete by thinking on the other side may be the other person is seeing problems that have to be faced by her and he doesn't want her to bear all this bullshit problems ahead.Initially may be he is deep in love and never thought of things ahead once she responded may be he started thinking ahead and saw only problems which he never want her to face. also he may have doubts if she have the courage to get through the problems that she have to face ahead. may be he just wants her to be happy all through her life, and he just hates her getting into troubles just because of his pure love(this wouldn't be called as dhoka). Hope for the best. Hope you atleast felt this thought. If yes do respond to my practical/reasonable thought.
ReplyDeleteHello ...44efe------- first of all thanks for sharing ur thoughts....Yes it is just a thought ..not at all a real experience....and I agree with ur words...completely true....would write on this in my next poem...:) :) Thanks Again..:) :)
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